神马作文网自己写的 帮看看有什么错误
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自己写的 帮看看有什么错误
When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photographs with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will interview some people who were involved in some special cases .I suppose the day like that makes me delighted and the job as a journalist is admirable.In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life.
麻烦帮看看时态有没有什么问题 有没有什么语法错误 或者更好的说法
第一句 when i was a student 可不可以把i was 去掉？
When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photographs with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will interview some people who were involved in some special cases .I suppose the day like that makes me delighted and the job as a journalist is admirable.In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life.
麻烦帮看看时态有没有什么问题 有没有什么语法错误 或者更好的说法
第一句 when i was a student 可不可以把i was 去掉？
When I was a student, I was eager to be a journalist. Every morning I get （got) assignments from the editor and go (went) out to take some unforgettable
photographs with a professional photographer who
(would) assist me in finishing the task. And I (had) interviews (with) some people who were involved in some special cases .
I (believe that ) the (time I spent) like that made me enjoyable,
and the job as a journalist is admirable and unusual in my life.
再问： And I (had) interviews (with) some people who .... 为什么要用 had 不用would？ 直接用interview 加sb.作宾语不行吗？为什么用with？ 谢谢你 你的回答真好！
再答： had 在这里更表示你是的确做了采访， 以避免和 would的可能去采访混淆。 直接用interview 加sb.作宾语是可行的， 但前面用了had 就要做这样的修改
再问： 改成 and my job was to interview some people who...行吗 ？
再答： 好的
photographs with a professional photographer who
(would) assist me in finishing the task. And I (had) interviews (with) some people who were involved in some special cases .
I (believe that ) the (time I spent) like that made me enjoyable,
and the job as a journalist is admirable and unusual in my life.
再问： And I (had) interviews (with) some people who .... 为什么要用 had 不用would？ 直接用interview 加sb.作宾语不行吗？为什么用with？ 谢谢你 你的回答真好！
再答： had 在这里更表示你是的确做了采访， 以避免和 would的可能去采访混淆。 直接用interview 加sb.作宾语是可行的， 但前面用了had 就要做这样的修改
再问： 改成 and my job was to interview some people who...行吗 ？
再答： 好的
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