神马作文网短文改错求高手做在线等
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短文改错求高手做在线等
1 A mother come to home from the store,tired.Her 8_year-old son,2 waiting for her,told her that her younger brother had written on3 the new wallpaper! Angery, she put down the things, but called his4 full name as she entered his room. He was shaken with fear. For5 the next ten minutes, she shouted at him, about how she saved6 the money. The more she said, the mad she got. A few minutes7 later,she went there again. Before she saw the wall, her eyes8 were filled with tears.There was nothing on the wallpaper. The9 message on the empty picture went deeply into her soul with a10 throw. It said,"I love Mommy." Around the words were a heart.
1 A mother come to home from the store,tired.Her 8_year-old son,2 waiting for her,told her that her younger brother had written on3 the new wallpaper! Angery, she put down the things, but called his4 full name as she entered his room. He was shaken with fear. For5 the next ten minutes, she shouted at him, about how she saved6 the money. The more she said, the mad she got. A few minutes7 later,she went there again. Before she saw the wall, her eyes8 were filled with tears.There was nothing on the wallpaper. The9 message on the empty picture went deeply into her soul with a10 throw. It said,"I love Mommy." Around the words were a heart.
A mother ccame home from the store,tired.Her 8-year-old son,
waiting for her,told her that his younger brother had written on
the new wallpaper!Angrily,she put down the things,but called his
full name as she entered his room.He was shaking with fear.For
the next ten minutes,she shouted at him,about how she had saved
the money.The more she said,the madder she got.A few minutes
later,she went there again.After she saw the wall,her eyes
were filled with tears.There was something on the wallpaper.The
message on the empty picture went deeply into her soul with a
throw.It said,"I love Mommy." Around the words was a heart.
waiting for her,told her that his younger brother had written on
the new wallpaper!Angrily,she put down the things,but called his
full name as she entered his room.He was shaking with fear.For
the next ten minutes,she shouted at him,about how she had saved
the money.The more she said,the madder she got.A few minutes
later,she went there again.After she saw the wall,her eyes
were filled with tears.There was something on the wallpaper.The
message on the empty picture went deeply into her soul with a
throw.It said,"I love Mommy." Around the words was a heart.