神马作文网请老师为我修改英语短文，
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根据中文提示，写出内容完整的文章：词语不少于100词。有些学生不爱吃学校的午饭， 常到校外去吃他们喜爱的食物，但是有些食物并不利于他们的健康，“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论，请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。 Some of students don’t like eating lunch at school, so they often go out of school to buy some delicious food. They are nice, but I’m afraid that it’s bad for them health because the food isn’t clean enough. If people want the students to be back and eat lunch at school, the cook of the school should be cook the meal nice and aliment. The important thing is the restaurant environment must be clean. Then the students eat out of the school will be back and enjoy the lunch at school!
解题思路： 首先要仔细审题，写作时要包含题目中的所有要求。再次要尽量避免单词拼写错误以及语法错误，尽量用简单句。最后如果对复句掌握好的话，可以适应使用复句来提高成绩。
解题过程：
1. but I’m afraid that it’s bad for them health because the food isn’t clean enough.此句存在语法错误。应改为：but I’m afraid that it’s bad for their health because the food isn’t clean enough.
2. the cook of the school should be cook the meal nice and aliment.此句不用被动语态。应改为：the cook of the school should make the meal delicious and healthy.
3. Then the students eat out of the school will be back and enjoy the lunch at school!应改为：Then the students who eat out of the school will be back and enjoy the lunch at school!
如有疑问，请添加讨论。
同时也祝你双节快乐，身体康健，学习进步！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
1. but I’m afraid that it’s bad for them health because the food isn’t clean enough.此句存在语法错误。应改为：but I’m afraid that it’s bad for their health because the food isn’t clean enough.
2. the cook of the school should be cook the meal nice and aliment.此句不用被动语态。应改为：the cook of the school should make the meal delicious and healthy.
3. Then the students eat out of the school will be back and enjoy the lunch at school!应改为：Then the students who eat out of the school will be back and enjoy the lunch at school!
如有疑问，请添加讨论。
同时也祝你双节快乐，身体康健，学习进步！
最终答案：略