求大神帮我检查一下英语有没有错误,
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求大神帮我检查一下英语有没有错误,
the lemon's dream

you say your favorite fruit is lemon.
i laugh at you.
i say lemon is sour so you always jealous.
i say i will plant a lot of lemons for you.
you say it is impossible.

i hope i will have a mountain slope ,there will be a lot of flowers of lemons .

when spring comes ,we can see the lemon flowers hand in hand .
when summer comes ,we can lie on the slope in the evening .
when fall comes ,we can harvest our fruit ,i will see every lemon will present your sweat smile .
when winter comes ,we can go to see the snow togother .

i will never give up
because this is your dream
so this is my dream .

you are the lemon of my eye.
the green lemon is my love .
when the lemon is yellow ,i hope we can have a family ,so i will do all things as i can for ours dream .
please bilieve me ,i will finish this dream .

when the potpourri spread in air my dream will come true .
the boy and the girl will get there dream in the golden fall .
but it only is a dream ,a dream nobody can touch.
柠檬的梦
你说,你最爱的水果是柠檬我总是嘲笑你我说,柠檬的酸和你的爱吃醋一样我说,我会为你播种柠檬你说,那不可能
我希望我可以有一片山坡,山坡上种满柠檬花,开满柠檬果
当春天来临时,我们可以手牵着手去看柠檬花当夏天来临时,我们可以躺在山坡上当秋天来临时,我们可以收获柠檬的果实,每个柠檬的果实上都会洋溢着你甜美的微笑当冬天来临时,我们可以一起在山坡上看雪的降临
我永远不会放弃,因为这是你的梦,所以这也是我的梦
绿色的柠檬代表着我的爱当柠檬变为黄色时,我希望我们可以组成一个美好的家庭,所以我会尽我的一切所能完成我们的梦想.
请相信我,这个梦想终究会实现
当柠檬的香气洋溢在整个山坡的空气中的时候,梦想就将会实现
男孩和女孩在这个金色的秋天收获他们的梦想
但这是梦,这只是一个梦
一个无人可以触及的梦
the lemon's dream

you say your favorite fruit is lemon.
i laugh at you.
i say lemon is sour so you always jealous.
i say i will plant a lot of lemons for you.
you say it is impossible.

i hope i will have a mountain slope ,there will be a lot of flowers of lemons .

when spring comes ,we can see the lemon flowers hand in hand .
when summer comes ,we can lie on the slope in the evening .
when fall comes ,we can harvest our fruit ,i will see every lemon will present your sweat smile .
when winter comes ,we can go to see the snow togother .

i will never give up
because this is your dream
so this is my dream .

you are the lemon of my eye.
the green lemon is my love .
when the lemon is yellow ,i hope we can have a family ,so i will do all things as i can for ours dream .
please bilieve me ,i will finish this dream .

when the potpourri spread in air my dream will come true .
the boy and the girl will get there dream in the golden fall .
but it only is a dream ,a dream nobody can touch.
柠檬的梦
你说,你最爱的水果是柠檬我总是嘲笑你我说,柠檬的酸和你的爱吃醋一样我说,我会为你播种柠檬你说,那不可能
我希望我可以有一片山坡,山坡上种满柠檬花,开满柠檬果
当春天来临时,我们可以手牵着手去看柠檬花当夏天来临时,我们可以躺在山坡上当秋天来临时,我们可以收获柠檬的果实,每个柠檬的果实上都会洋溢着你甜美的微笑当冬天来临时,我们可以一起在山坡上看雪的降临
我永远不会放弃,因为这是你的梦,所以这也是我的梦
绿色的柠檬代表着我的爱当柠檬变为黄色时,我希望我们可以组成一个美好的家庭,所以我会尽我的一切所能完成我们的梦想.
请相信我,这个梦想终究会实现
当柠檬的香气洋溢在整个山坡的空气中的时候,梦想就将会实现
男孩和女孩在这个金色的秋天收获他们的梦想
但这是梦,这只是一个梦
一个无人可以触及的梦
we can lie on the slope in the evening .【晚上我们可以躺在斜坡上】你‘晚上’没有翻译出来哦
you are the lemon of my eye.【你是我眼中的柠檬】这句你上面没有翻译哦
好了,没有错误了
再问: 英语句子里有语法错误么,或者单词使用不当
再答: i will see every lemon will present your sweat smile .
【这里貌似出现两个will不行吧,第二个去掉】
you are the lemon of my eye.【这里的eye要加S】
so i will do all things as i can for ours dream .【这应在as后加上possible as ,还有ours
改为our】
i will finish this dream .【写为i will make the dream come true 比较好】
when the potpourri spread in air my dream will come true【spread加S】
you are the lemon of my eye.【你是我眼中的柠檬】这句你上面没有翻译哦
好了,没有错误了
再问: 英语句子里有语法错误么,或者单词使用不当
再答: i will see every lemon will present your sweat smile .
【这里貌似出现两个will不行吧,第二个去掉】
you are the lemon of my eye.【这里的eye要加S】
so i will do all things as i can for ours dream .【这应在as后加上possible as ,还有ours
改为our】
i will finish this dream .【写为i will make the dream come true 比较好】
when the potpourri spread in air my dream will come true【spread加S】