英语好的进,[英语]1.My hometown is a pretty city,so people there are

英语好的进,[英语]
1.My hometown is a pretty city,so people there are
2.kind and polite.With coming of spring,grass and
3.trees turn green,and flowers grew in many colors
4.In summer,the sea under the blue skies is even more
5.beautiful.After autumn arrives,the city looks as an
6.old man with leaves fallen from the trees.In winter,
7.a lot of white birds come to my city for food.I can
8.wait more patiently above the sea for quite a long
9.time.While they find fish come to them without delay.
10.That is my city,and i love it so much
11.I am very excited to have accpted an e-mail from
12.you.I'm glad you have made such a great progress
13.that you can write your e-mail good Chinese.I read
14.your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you
15.sent it to me.How time flies!Our friendship has lasted
16.for several months.We have got to know but learned a
17.lot from each other.Yes,it is clearly that your life in
18.your country is quite different from me.Thanks again
19.for waiting to me.I'm looking forward to hear from
20.you soon.Best wishes to you and your family.
21.Last summer I take a part-time job in the International
22.Camp for children.I have been told one more worker
23.will be needed this year and I think you are fit it.How
24.about join us?The camp is at the foot of a small hill
25.close to a river.It is so a beautiful place!We can hear
26.birds singing happy all around.Everybody sleeps in
27.tents,that is very exciting.We usually work only five
28.hours a day,so we will have plenty of spare time visit the
29.area and have a fun.I am sure it will be an unfotgettable
30.experience.If you have interests in it ,reply to me soon.
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1.so people there ===> and people there
2.with coming of spring ===> with the coming of spring
3.grew > which is
28.spare time visit ===> spare time to visit
29.have a fun ==> have fun
30.have interests in ===> have interest in