英语翻译Words That Changes a LifeNot a big moment,perhaps,yet sm

英语翻译
Words That Changes a Life
Not a big moment,perhaps,yet small moments sometimes last a very long time.And a few words – though they may mean little at the time to the people who say them can have enormous power.
As a boy,Dalkoff was terribly insecure and shy.He had few friends and no self-confidence.One day in October 1965,his secondary-school English teacher,Ruth Brauch,gave the class an assignment.The students had been reading To Kill a Mockingbird.Now they were to write their own chapter that would follow the last chapter of the novel.
Dalkoff wrote his chapter and turned it in.Today he cannot recall anything special about the chapter he wrote,or what grade Mrs.Brauch gave him.What he does remember – what he will never forget – are the four words Mrs.Brauch wrote in the margin of the paper:“This is good writing”.
Four words.They changed his life.
“Until I read those words,I had no idea of who I was or what I was going to be,” he said.Over the rest of that year in school,he wrote many short stories and always brought them to school for Mrs.Brauch to evaluate.She was encouraging,though and honest.“She was just what I needed,” Dalkoff said.
He was named co-editor of his second-school newspaper.His confidence grew; his horizons broadened,he started off on a successful,fulfilling life.For his 30th secondary-school reunion,Dalkoff went back and visited Mrs.Brauch,who had retired.He told her what her four words had done for him.Mrs.Brauch was especially moved by the story.“At that moment I think we both realized that Mrs.Brauch had cast an incredibly long shadow,” he said.
“This is good writing.” So few words.They can change everything.

改变一生的话语
短暂的一会,甚至是一小会儿,有时候却很漫长.几个词语,也许在当时对说话的人没有意义,单是却对他人有无尽的影响力.
还是个小男孩的时候,Dalkoff （人名）非常胆小,害怕.他没有朋友,液没有自信.1965年10月的一天,Dalkoff的英语老师Ruth Brauch给他们布置了一个作业,同学们读完杀死一只呻吟的小鸟一篇文章后,同学们被要求按照自己的想法写出故事的结尾.Dalkoff写完自己的故事结尾后交了上去.现在,他已经回忆不起有什么特别的情节,液想不起来老师给了他多少分数.他唯一记得的,也是他永远不会忘记的是Brauch女士在他作文的空白出写的四个词语：你的作文好极了.
这四个词语,就这苏哥词语改变了他的一生.
“直到我读到这句话,我不知道我是谁,我也不知道我即将来要做什么样的人”,他说.在学校的最后几年,他写了很多短的故事,每次都让Brauch老师评价.英语老师很鼓励他,仔细而又诚恳.Dalkoff说,她说的就是我所需要的.
他称了这个学校的合作编辑人之一.他也逐渐有了自信,开阔了眼界,他开始迈向成功,重试自己的生活.在毕业30周年的聚会上,Dalkoff走过去拜访他已经退休的英语老师,他告诉她,她的一句话给他带来的影响.Brauch夫人感动了.“在当时,我认为我们意识到Brauch夫人留下了难以相信的阴影.”
“真是一篇好作文”.如此简单的一句话.却改变的一切.