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请各位帮忙Teaching Outside Class急啊!
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题目Teaching Outside Class.(agree or disagree)
This is a topic that is being widely talked about.People take different views of the question.Some parents argue that teaching outside class may help students to take high achievement.Others believe that in order to have more and more students to study in outside class,teachers are teaching less in class little by little.In my opinion,I am disagree with the teacher about this coure.The reasons for this are as folliws.
Firstly,it is unfair to some student who can't pay the extra tuition.Teaching outside class will lose a way to acquire knowledge for them.Secondlu,there is no denying the fact that we need teacher to guide us in our studies,so study at school is necessary for students to get more knowledge.If students spend too much time studying outside class,how can we cultiate a taste of our hobbise?Last but not least,it is teacher's duty to teach,instead of a way to make money.A good teacher will treat every student and every class very serious and reponsible.
In short,it can be said that.
再写个结尾、
题目Teaching Outside Class.(agree or disagree)
This is a topic that is being widely talked about.People take different views of the question.Some parents argue that teaching outside class may help students to take high achievement.Others believe that in order to have more and more students to study in outside class,teachers are teaching less in class little by little.In my opinion,I am disagree with the teacher about this coure.The reasons for this are as folliws.
Firstly,it is unfair to some student who can't pay the extra tuition.Teaching outside class will lose a way to acquire knowledge for them.Secondlu,there is no denying the fact that we need teacher to guide us in our studies,so study at school is necessary for students to get more knowledge.If students spend too much time studying outside class,how can we cultiate a taste of our hobbise?Last but not least,it is teacher's duty to teach,instead of a way to make money.A good teacher will treat every student and every class very serious and reponsible.
In short,it can be said that.
This is a topic that（改成which） is being widely talked about.People take different views of the question.Some parents argue（argue是争吵的意思,这里最好用think,认为） that teaching outside class may help students to（to删掉,help sb.sth.,没有to ） take（take改成make,这个是比较好的固定搭配） high achievement（加s变成achievements）.Others believe that in order to have more and more students to study in outside class,teachers are teaching less in class little by little(一点点不是这么翻的……有点小汗,这个little by little删掉,跟outside对应的是inside而不是in.整句话改成teachers are teching inside class less and less.).In my opinion,I am disagree with the teacher（这里语意不明,你同意的是哪个观点,没有说清楚啊?另外be disagree with这个说法我还真没听过,感觉怪怪的,外国人不会这么说的.句子改成I agree with the first[或者second]one about that.） about this coure.The reasons for this are as folliws（拼写错误,follow）.
Firstly,it is unfair to some student who can't pay the extra tuition.Teaching（这里主语是学生,所以动词应该是Have 在句子里就是Having) outside class will lose a way to acquire knowledge for them.Secondlu（y?）,there is no denying the fact that we need teacher to guide us in our studies,so study at school is necessary for students to get more knowledge.If students spend too much time studying outside class,how can we（主语要一致,用they比较好） cultiate（这个词是什么意思,词典里没有啊……） a taste of our（跟上面一样,用their比较好) hobbise（hobby这个词……一般没有复数……直接说hobby就可以了……）?Last but not least,it is teacher's duty to teach,instead of a way to make money.A good teacher will treat every student and every class very serious（改成seriously,副词才能修饰动词） and reponsible（一样的,改成responsibily).
In short,I disagree the outside class plan.It can be said that teaching outside class can only disadvantages the students.The school should arrange less outside class for students and pay more attentions on inside class lessons.
Firstly,it is unfair to some student who can't pay the extra tuition.Teaching（这里主语是学生,所以动词应该是Have 在句子里就是Having) outside class will lose a way to acquire knowledge for them.Secondlu（y?）,there is no denying the fact that we need teacher to guide us in our studies,so study at school is necessary for students to get more knowledge.If students spend too much time studying outside class,how can we（主语要一致,用they比较好） cultiate（这个词是什么意思,词典里没有啊……） a taste of our（跟上面一样,用their比较好) hobbise（hobby这个词……一般没有复数……直接说hobby就可以了……）?Last but not least,it is teacher's duty to teach,instead of a way to make money.A good teacher will treat every student and every class very serious（改成seriously,副词才能修饰动词） and reponsible（一样的,改成responsibily).
In short,I disagree the outside class plan.It can be said that teaching outside class can only disadvantages the students.The school should arrange less outside class for students and pay more attentions on inside class lessons.