神马作文网自己写的英语文章,帮忙改一下错啊
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自己写的英语文章,帮忙改一下错啊
I don't remember today is June 7th untill Ocean told me, 2004 I took the exam, 2005 my little sister took the exam, and today my little brother will take the exam, best wishes for you,my boy.
I uesd to think that it would be better after my entering the college, but in fact it is not, nevertheless it is worse than before, maybe everyone has to meet it for you are growing.
Now I am not consider the life will be better, it should be harder as the social competition. I read a news about the death of Huawei's engineer,who is only 25 years old. He died of tire and hard work. It is a bad news not only to his family but also to everyone.
I don't remember today is June 7th untill Ocean told me, 2004 I took the exam, 2005 my little sister took the exam, and today my little brother will take the exam, best wishes for you,my boy.
I uesd to think that it would be better after my entering the college, but in fact it is not, nevertheless it is worse than before, maybe everyone has to meet it for you are growing.
Now I am not consider the life will be better, it should be harder as the social competition. I read a news about the death of Huawei's engineer,who is only 25 years old. He died of tire and hard work. It is a bad news not only to his family but also to everyone.
第一段的and today my little brother will take the exam后面加too
或者改为and so my little brother today
或者改为and so my little brother today