纠正英语作文I spent time in the beautiful country in my summer wac

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纠正英语作文
I spent time in the beautiful country in my summer wacation.I went hiking with my friends ,we were went bike riding ,through it was very danger,we had a good time.And then we were went swimming ,went fishing and so on.The most interesting thing is went sightseeing and visited the aquarium.This is my most happy summer vacation

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I spent my summer wacation in the beautiful country .I went hiking with my friends by bikes.Although it was very dangerous,we had a good time.In the meanwhile ,we went swimming and fishing.The most interesting thing is that i went sightseeing and visited the aquarium.This is my happiest summer vacation!
恕我直言你这个语病和用词错的有点多,帮你改好了,纯手打.
再问：谢谢！不过我觉得我英语不差，平时都有90几分，我9月份上初三了，可是我觉得我写英语作文总是中国式的，，作文10分满分总只拿得到7.5或8分，这个要怎么纠正这个毛病呢？
再答：我觉得可能有点地方你错的太过于明显，然后老师给分就低了，比如 it was very danger。后面改用形容词的或者用of+名词做形容词be of danger。写作时候要避免句子重复，改用一些较为复杂的句子，别用零散的句子。你以后可以把你写的发给我我帮你改。望采纳谢谢。

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