大家帮我看看这篇GRE issue能拿几分哈,9月1日就考试了

大家帮我看看这篇GRE issue能拿几分哈,9月1日就考试了
With the development of education,faculty quality is the most important element to judge whether a college or university is challenging or not,and thus it has become a focus whether it is necessary for faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions.In my point of view,I am inclined to the view that faculty should spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
Text book is an important source for students to receive and absorb knowledge,and thus text books are very useful in students’ study.Yet,though text books are very classical because they are compiled by many education experts,they fail to keep pace with the development of the science and technology.For example,computer science is important specialty that apply to our life closely,while the concept in computer science is updating considerably fast in our society.However,our text books are not updating,and hence result in the consequence that students can not keep pace with the development of science and technology.And such situation is also happened in other specialties.To solve this problem,it is necessary for faculty to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
Then,faculty can have a better command of the courses they teach by working outside the academic world.Since education develops very fast in our society,the shortage of Faculty of university and college is more serious than before.As a result,Universities and colleges hired too many faculty who have not enough experience in teaching but only with their academic degree,and thus students cannot receive a favorable education from courses of these young teachers.According to the situation,it is necessary for faculty to broaden their horizon,strengthen their knowledge and linking theory with practice by spending time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.
What’ more,it is very indispensable for students to learn more about the prospect of their specialty in order to decide what area in their specialty they want to develop.However,the education of employment guidance is too feeble because the faculty of universities and colleges know little about the prospect of their courses.
Students can learn more about the information and set a aspect they want to develop in their specialty by absorbing their the experience of their faculty.
To summary,I hope that measures should be taken to guarantee that faculty will spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach.Only by this can students nowadays receive better education and become more competitive in our society.courses they teach.

LZ你好,我有2次参加GRE考试的经历,我作文的均分是4分,不是很高,因为Issue的确是比较难写的.先不说别的,我刚刚把你的文章放到word里面查看一下,只有379个字,这对于issue来说是远远不够的,3分作文,你至少也得写到450个字.而且GRE的考试是不会有最高字数限制的,也就是说,你的字数写得越多,逻辑条理越清晰,就越有可能拿高分,我同学作文拿了5.5分,issue写到了将近700字,所以,你这篇文章字数肯定是不够的,你语言用的再好,单词用的再灵活,3分也是有点难度的.能写到450字左右的话,基本上3分肯定是有的.希望对你有帮助吧,以上是我的经验之谈,有什么问题可以再问我.祝你好运,conquer GRE!~