神马作文网针对浪费现象的倡议书
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Dear teathers and schoolmates, We are so sorry to see so much waste in our school! Such as,some students did not leave the taps on after cleaning hands.It's a so small thing,but it waste our energy.Energy can be over.When there is no water on the Earth,what should we do?So everyone should do something to save energy.we can do something easily,for example turn the lights off when leaving,do this can save energy.We shouldn't waste paper and other school things.Because paper is made from trees.Trees can bring us oxygen.Now everyone's family is not poor,so many students throw the food away after meals.It's a big waste.The food need famers to grow it,need to water and need car to sent them to us.So wasting food is wasting lots of energy.So we should save everything around us.Let's work on it,make our have energy to do something important. Class1,Grade9
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Dear teathers and schoolmates,
We are so sorry to see so much waste in our school!
Such as,some students did not turn the taps off after cleaning
hands.It's a so small thing,but it waste our energy.Energy can be over
When there is no water on the earth,what should we do?So everyone should do something to save energy.we can do something
easily,for example turn the lights off when leaving,do this can
save energy.We shouldn't waste paper and other school things.
Because paper is made from trees.Trees can bring us oxygen.Now
everyone's family is not poor,so many students throw the food
away after meals.It's a big waste.The food needs famers to grow
it,It needs to water and needs cars to sent them to us.So
wasting food is wasting lots of energy.So we should save
everything around us.Let's work on it,make us have enough energy to do something important.
同学：你的倡议书写的很好，你的英语基本功非常扎实。语言流畅，表达能力强，主旨大意很到位。有几个词需要修改。像洗手以后没有关掉水龙头，关上是turn off. 食物需要--，食物是不可数名词，故用三单形式。需要小汽车，有么用needs a car /needs cars. 让我们拥有充足的能源去做些重要的事情。make us,不是make our
Class1,Grade9
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Dear teathers and schoolmates,
We are so sorry to see so much waste in our school!
Such as,some students did not turn the taps off after cleaning
hands.It's a so small thing,but it waste our energy.Energy can be over
When there is no water on the earth,what should we do?So everyone should do something to save energy.we can do something
easily,for example turn the lights off when leaving,do this can
save energy.We shouldn't waste paper and other school things.
Because paper is made from trees.Trees can bring us oxygen.Now
everyone's family is not poor,so many students throw the food
away after meals.It's a big waste.The food needs famers to grow
it,It needs to water and needs cars to sent them to us.So
wasting food is wasting lots of energy.So we should save
everything around us.Let's work on it,make us have enough energy to do something important.
同学：你的倡议书写的很好，你的英语基本功非常扎实。语言流畅，表达能力强，主旨大意很到位。有几个词需要修改。像洗手以后没有关掉水龙头，关上是turn off. 食物需要--，食物是不可数名词，故用三单形式。需要小汽车，有么用needs a car /needs cars. 让我们拥有充足的能源去做些重要的事情。make us,不是make our
Class1,Grade9
最终答案：略