神马作文网请英语高手们帮忙看一篇文章
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请英语高手们帮忙看一篇文章
这是一篇要求30秒的演讲稿,
Dear judges,good afternoon!My name is Ding and I`m from Harbin No.3 High School,which is the best high school in Heilongjiang Province.In the past 10 years,I have been studying English very hard and have acquired basic knowledge of the English language.When I am free,I prefer to watch American dramas for relaxing.About future,I want to apply for Peking Universaty to realise my dream.That is all,thank you for listening!
帮忙改一下语法错误和说的不地道的地方！
这是一篇要求30秒的演讲稿,
Dear judges,good afternoon!My name is Ding and I`m from Harbin No.3 High School,which is the best high school in Heilongjiang Province.In the past 10 years,I have been studying English very hard and have acquired basic knowledge of the English language.When I am free,I prefer to watch American dramas for relaxing.About future,I want to apply for Peking Universaty to realise my dream.That is all,thank you for listening!
帮忙改一下语法错误和说的不地道的地方！
when i am free稍微有点不好,你可以改成when i have free time
还有about future最好改成in the future
还有你的university 拼错了
还有about future最好改成in the future
还有你的university 拼错了