谁能给我个雅思口语6分-6.5分的示范,或者干脆贴出文字内容,我想知道大概什么水平.

谁能给我个雅思口语6分-6.5分的示范,或者干脆贴出文字内容,我想知道大概什么水平.

我的口语是6.5,不过个人觉得老师有点打低了,这个是练习时写的口语作文
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Well,there are tons of reasons for family party in China,we Chinese are traditionally fund of gathering,especially family mumbers.There are mainly two kinds of reasons,one is traditional festivals,namely,the Spring Festival,the Mid-autumn Festival,the Latern Festival etc.the other one is big events,such as,giving bith,furderal,graduation,marriage and so on.
Well,since my family don’t have this kind of attempts,so I’m not quite sure.But in my opinion,that depends on mainly two aspects.The first is the scale of the family,if there are a lot of members in the family,there may be a really big and expensive family party.The second reason is the finacial condition of that family.I’ve read some news on the Internet about the luxiury wedding in some part of China,those billionariers who use scores of benzs,BMWs,Land Rovers as the mannar cars for the wedding,those famous actors who are given proformances on the wedding.Which sum up to be a horrible amount of money.This kind of people,they are rich and want to show off,that’s why they spent so much money on family parties.So I don’t really approve that.It’s only a waste of time.The ture love can’t be measures by money.
Yes,I suppose the parties held by friends are more causul,you don’t need to watch you manner and your way of speaking.But a family party is very formal,to be a lady or a gentleman is very important.So,the kind of atomosphere is really.
然后这个是我的老师写的口语作文范文
喜欢的运动：瑜伽
Yoga
It seems that everybody is talking about sports this year with the 2008 Olympic Games and the European Football Cup and the like.
Being a girl,I’m not the athletic type.
I enjoy doing yoga.
And,with a little background music,yoga helps me relax both physically and psychologically.
The reasons why I enjoy doing yoga this much are three-fold.
To start with,I’m a girl,so I care greatly about my figure,
and yoga is a slimming exercise that assists you to burn away a lot of the extra energy that you don’t use everyday.
So naturally,it can help everybody lose weight and achieve the ideal figure.
Secondly,the meditation you do with yoga can help you,for a short time,
forget all your problems at work or at school.
Close your eyes and think about it!
When you’re doing yoga on the beach,
the wind blows onto your body and the sun shines evenly on your face,
it’s totally therapeutic.
Last but not least,yoga is more than just an exercise.
During yoga,your muscles are always straining,
and it strengthens the flexibility and toughness of your body.
I know,I know!
People say yoga is not a sport per se (本质上的),
but it doesn’t mean it’s any easier than physical games such as basketball or hockey.
It takes patience and perseverance to be really good at it.
And I’ve got news for you—it good for both girls AND men.
I think the world of yoga can reach deep into our souls.
Nowadays,we’re so preoccupied with our trivial worries about finance,interpersonal relationships,work,future,… blah,blah,blah.
Yoga gives us a chance to stop,and think.
Yoga returns us to what we really are.
就酱
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