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What do you miss most about your country?Choose two orthree things and explain each one with as much detail as you can.
(The question is present tense so most of the answer shouldbe too.)
注意:请使用present tense,不能使用过去时态.补充详细一些越来越好!
When I was very a lone in theUnited States,it makes me miss my family and my friends.Every time.I wasmissing something in China when I came to Chinatown.First,in my home,myfamily liked to talk with me about that some fun stories.I listened to themwith relish.They always cooked a lot of my favorite food such as differentkinds fish food.So I miss them so much.They often took me go to see movies.Andwe went shopping together.It made me became a happy person.Then,my friendsoften sent text messages to me,we were chatting with drank our coffee.We chattedmost about that travel and food.Finally,I miss home so much,and I oftenwatch a lot of pictures of china.I will back to China next year.
请英语专家帮忙修改我的文章,
What do you miss most about your country?Choose two orthree things and explain each one with as much detail as you can.
请改为下面的句子
What are you most concerned about your country Please list two or three things which are in the right place to account for what you are most concerned about your country.The more detailed,The better .