talk about entertainment英语作文

talk about entertainment英语作文
1 what do you usually do you fun
2 and what about your parents
3 is age a important factor in entertainment choice
4 what are the advantages and disadvantage
最好围绕这几个点写,很着急要!一篇口语作文

我移民在美国,帮你写一篇,你的第一个问题写错了,改下吧.看不懂.
Entertainment,is what we usually do when we have free time,maybe it is when we finished our homework,or maybe it is just that you wanna have some fun,there are a lot of entertainments during life or we can say our community,here is what i do..
When i finished my homework during weekdays,i usually try to make my self as comfortable as i can be.Maybe lying on the sofa or even sleeping that is because i am tired.During weekend,I would do play sports,like basketball.
Well,my mom and dad were different from me,they had to work all day,so when they come back,they would always be on the sofa or at the table watching TV.
Myself think that age is a important factor in the entertainment choice.Little kids would just go out and run around,teenagers would like to play videogames and sports,adults might just want to relax and watch tv,people are different.
Advantages are that i can relax myself or you can say that enjoying life.Disadvantages are that i usually woudln't got up when doing some entertainment,it would be a really bad thing if you miss your homework or forgot that you had a test tommorrow when doing you entertainment.But still,i think entertainment is really important.
自己看看吧,我个人觉得可以了,应该没什么语法错误,有问题的话问我吧,