神马作文网急 初中生英语作文dreamjob求纠错
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急 初中生英语作文dreamjob求纠错
Every one has a dream job,so do I.\x05In the past few times,I want to be an adventurer in the future.Because my dream is live in Tibet.But I know I'm weak in health.And I think it's not a good job for me.\x05So,my dream job has changed.Now,I want to be an enterpriser in the future.\x05Why do I want to be an enterpriser?Because I like challenge.And I think I am good at managing and organizing.\x05But now I am only a middle school student.I must study hard.And then I will have some practice when I grow up.Cause experience is very important for this job.\x05I believe,I can succeed if I work hard.有好的建议欢迎提啊,有追加分数,
Every one has a dream job,so do I.\x05In the past few times,I want to be an adventurer in the future.Because my dream is live in Tibet.But I know I'm weak in health.And I think it's not a good job for me.\x05So,my dream job has changed.Now,I want to be an enterpriser in the future.\x05Why do I want to be an enterpriser?Because I like challenge.And I think I am good at managing and organizing.\x05But now I am only a middle school student.I must study hard.And then I will have some practice when I grow up.Cause experience is very important for this job.\x05I believe,I can succeed if I work hard.有好的建议欢迎提啊,有追加分数,
Every one has a dream job, so do I. In the past few times, I wantED to be an adventurer in the future. Because my dream is TO live in Tibet. But I know I'm weak in health. And I think it's not a good job for me. So, my dream job has changed. Now, I want to be an enterpriser in the future. Why do I want to be an enterpriser? Because I like challengING. And I think I am good at managing and organizing. But now I am only a middle school student. I must study hard. And then I will have some practice when I grow up. Cause experience is very important for this job. I believe, I can succeed if I work hard,大些部分为改正,只是时态和语法的问题