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下文共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。修改过的地方请用红笔标出。 Dear John, You said in your letter that you are moving and feel sadly. I can understand what you feel.While moving can be difficult,it can also be excited. Before you move, think about which friends you want to keep in touch. You would write to them but share news about your lives. Think of moving like an adventure, with new places to explore and new people to meet.Trying to be friendly to people you meet and show interest in what you are doing. If you give yourself a time and let people get to know you, you will soon be making new friends. Yours Li Hua
解题思路： 注意分析句子结构和成分
解题过程：
You said in your letter that you are moving and feel sad (与系动词feel构成系表结构)I can understand how（做系动词feel的表语） you feel.While moving can be difficult,it can also be exciting (用-ing 形式修饰事件). Before you move, think about which friends you want to keep in touch（加介词with 后接friends做宾语）. You will (将来要发生的事情) write to them and （此处缺少表示并列关系的连词而不是转折关系）share news about your lives. Think of moving as(固定短语 think of ... as ...) an adventure, with new places to explore and new people to meet.Try （用祈使句，与后面的show并列）to be friendly to people you （加will）meet and show interest in what they(根据语意) are doing. If you give yourself a time and let people get to know you, you will soon be making new friends.
这是老师自己理解的，若有问题请继续讨论啊，祝你快乐！！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
You said in your letter that you are moving and feel sad (与系动词feel构成系表结构)I can understand how（做系动词feel的表语） you feel.While moving can be difficult,it can also be exciting (用-ing 形式修饰事件). Before you move, think about which friends you want to keep in touch（加介词with 后接friends做宾语）. You will (将来要发生的事情) write to them and （此处缺少表示并列关系的连词而不是转折关系）share news about your lives. Think of moving as(固定短语 think of ... as ...) an adventure, with new places to explore and new people to meet.Try （用祈使句，与后面的show并列）to be friendly to people you （加will）meet and show interest in what they(根据语意) are doing. If you give yourself a time and let people get to know you, you will soon be making new friends.
这是老师自己理解的，若有问题请继续讨论啊，祝你快乐！！
最终答案：略