神马作文网帮忙看一下这篇初一英语作文有没有语法错误
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帮忙看一下这篇初一英语作文有没有语法错误
I want to be
Everyone has his dream,some want to be a teacher ,some want to be a doctor.As for me ,I want to be a writer.
I often do some reading.I think the articles of the writers are so wonderful.So I try writing in my free time.Then I find me writing can let me happy.I can write my imagination,my idea or my story in my articles.
In a word ,I want to be a writer in the future.
我觉得中间的时态可能有点问题,以及then I find…… 那里可能也有句式不对的地方.
I want to be
Everyone has his dream,some want to be a teacher ,some want to be a doctor.As for me ,I want to be a writer.
I often do some reading.I think the articles of the writers are so wonderful.So I try writing in my free time.Then I find me writing can let me happy.I can write my imagination,my idea or my story in my articles.
In a word ,I want to be a writer in the future.
我觉得中间的时态可能有点问题,以及then I find…… 那里可能也有句式不对的地方.
than i find that那里你可以换成Besides,i found that.然后你要注意write sth in 和 write sth on的区别 .你这里应该是write my imagination.on. 再答： 还有就是make me happy 比let me happy好.虽然中文翻译是一样.