英语翻译优化大家好, 下面是我们2014年的年终总结, 年终总结分别要从4个角度出发来做年度总结,分别为（Accompl

英语翻译优化
大家好, 下面是我们2014年的年终总结, 年终总结分别要从4个角度出发来做年度总结,分别为（Accomplishments,STRENGTHS,Develepment Opportunites 和DIVERSITY& INCLUSION ）,下面是我的总结, 总感觉很多语句需要优化, 还麻烦大家了.
Accomplishments
Ensured emergencyprojects(including ESI,PPME,Ixload,40G CNA, Vmax V3,HP RPA) be completed onschedule with high quality. Totally 22 bug be identified.
Strong abilityto handle urgency, such as HP RPA, Ixload evaluation, Automation PPME linux framework,evensacrifice personal time for ensuring project delivery.
Strongwillingness of improving working process, such as joining Efficiency ImprovingTeam, take lead of reforming PPME ESM structure, come up ideas for Automationprocess,Hop Lab process.
STRENGTHS
Strong sense ofresponsibility, high level initiative, always try my best to think more forachieving better delivery.
Independentthinking yet teamwork, plus automation knowledge, always deliver highefficiency work.
Strong execution,guarantee task been delivered on schedule.
Learning byworking, extract knowledge during project. I have been growing up from a rookieto a qualified storage engineer with confidence of taking on much more challengein coming year.
DEvelepment Opportunites
Since I joined EMC, my 5 years’ career planning (3 yearsremain) is to become a principle engineer. I know there are still gaps. Forachieving this, I need to learn more knowledge on various product, to build up muchstronger English presentation skill, to take some project leader work andcontribute more to team and company for improving my influence.
I will work much harder towards my planning in coming year.

accomplishments
emergencyprojects ensured（包括ESI,ppme 40G,ixload,DAC,Vmax V3,惠普RPA）be completed onschedule以及高质量.be identified 22完全错误.
强烈的急迫性abilityto处理,如惠普RPA,ixload评价框架,自动化ppme Linux,evensacrifice time for ensuring个人项目交付.
strongwillingness of improving working process,such as连接效率improvingteam带铅of重整ppme ESM ideas forautomationprocess结构,而来,跳实验室过程.
优点
强民生高感,主动,总是尝试我最佳to think more forachieving更好的交付.
然而independentthinking团队,更自动化的知识,提供highefficiency总是工作.
强大的执行,保证交付的任务,我们计划.
学习byworking提取物的知识,在项目.I have been growing up from a rookieto有合格的存储工程师以及信心oftaking我们更challengein来年.
发展机遇
自从我加入EMC 5年,我职业生涯规划”（3 yearsremain）is to become a principle工程师.I know there are still的差距.forachieving这,我需要学习更多的知识,我们的各种产品,to build up muchstronger English presentation技能,to take some more to work andcontribute项目领导团队和公司完善的影响.
我对我的工作多努力规划在新的一年.