神马作文网初二英语作文 大家看一下
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初二英语作文 大家看一下
Last winter holiday, I went to Harbin with my mother.It took us three hours to get there. We arrived by plane in the evening. It was very cold in winter. There was snow and ice everywhere. I was playing with snow when my mother came to the hotel. Skating was also very interesting there.I had a great time.I hope I can go there again one day.
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Last winter holiday, I went to Harbin with my mother.It took us three hours to get there. We arrived by plane in the evening. It was very cold in winter. There was snow and ice everywhere. I was playing with snow when my mother came to the hotel. Skating was also very interesting there.I had a great time.I hope I can go there again one day.
大家帮我看看有没有什么错误
Skating was also very interesting there.这一句最好用一般现在时,因为陈述的是一个你认为的事实,不是说你去玩的那个时候滑雪很有趣.
It was very cold in winter,这一句也是同样道理,你没有强调是你去的那一年的冬天很冷,而是那里的冬天一直很冷,也是一个事实,也要用一般现在时.
It was very cold in winter,这一句也是同样道理,你没有强调是你去的那一年的冬天很冷,而是那里的冬天一直很冷,也是一个事实,也要用一般现在时.