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What can we do for our earth
Dear fellow students,
Faced with more and more environment problems that the temperature of the earth is going up and environment is destroyed more serious, we should do something for our earth..
The earth is our home, we can’t live without the earth. So it’s our responsibility to protect her. First, we should save electricity and water, if we waste water, the last drip of water in the earth will be our tear. Second, protecting forests is of great importance, for it can produce oxygen for us. To protect forest, what we can do is that we use both sides of paper whenever it’s possible. In addition, not using paper cups and disposable chopsticks which are made of wood is a way to save forest.
I believe that these small things are done can help make our earth more beautiful..
The students union
老师 辛苦了，给出分数 我是小黄
Dear fellow students,
Faced with more and more environment problems that the temperature of the earth is going up and environment is destroyed more serious, we should do something for our earth..
The earth is our home, we can’t live without the earth. So it’s our responsibility to protect her. First, we should save electricity and water, if we waste water, the last drip of water in the earth will be our tear. Second, protecting forests is of great importance, for it can produce oxygen for us. To protect forest, what we can do is that we use both sides of paper whenever it’s possible. In addition, not using paper cups and disposable chopsticks which are made of wood is a way to save forest.
I believe that these small things are done can help make our earth more beautiful..
The students union
老师 辛苦了，给出分数 我是小黄
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解题过程：
What can we do for our earth Dear fellow students, Faced with more and more environment problems that the temperature of the earth is going up and environment is destroyed more serious, we should do something for our earth.. The earth is our home, we can’t live without the earth. So it’s our responsibility to protect her. First, we should save electricity and water, if we waste water, the last drip of water in the earth will be our tear. Second, protecting forests is of great importance, for it can produce oxygen for us. To protect forest, what we can do is that we use both sides of paper whenever it’s possible. In addition, not using paper cups and disposable chopsticks which are made of wood is a way to save forest. I believe that these small things are done can help make our earth more beautiful.. The students union 1、 改为seriously，修饰的是动词destroyed 2、 这个句子的不定式有些不妥当。非谓语动词做状语时，其逻辑主语就是句子的主语，应该与句子主语保持一致。这个句子的主语是句子，不会to protect……的。所以可以把本句主语改为we can use…… 3、 既然这个另外一个方法，a就改成another吧，这样上下文会更流畅。 4、 这个句子多了谓语，把are done去掉。 5、 本文很漂亮！下划线是精华句子。给分22分。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略
解题过程：
What can we do for our earth Dear fellow students, Faced with more and more environment problems that the temperature of the earth is going up and environment is destroyed more serious, we should do something for our earth.. The earth is our home, we can’t live without the earth. So it’s our responsibility to protect her. First, we should save electricity and water, if we waste water, the last drip of water in the earth will be our tear. Second, protecting forests is of great importance, for it can produce oxygen for us. To protect forest, what we can do is that we use both sides of paper whenever it’s possible. In addition, not using paper cups and disposable chopsticks which are made of wood is a way to save forest. I believe that these small things are done can help make our earth more beautiful.. The students union 1、 改为seriously，修饰的是动词destroyed 2、 这个句子的不定式有些不妥当。非谓语动词做状语时，其逻辑主语就是句子的主语，应该与句子主语保持一致。这个句子的主语是句子，不会to protect……的。所以可以把本句主语改为we can use…… 3、 既然这个另外一个方法，a就改成another吧，这样上下文会更流畅。 4、 这个句子多了谓语，把are done去掉。 5、 本文很漂亮！下划线是精华句子。给分22分。
如对本题解答还有疑问，可在“继续讨论”中留言，我收到后会尽快给你答复。谢谢你的配合！匆忙中难免有疏漏，请多包涵哦。我是菁菁草老师，随时为你答疑解惑!
最终答案：略