神马作文网我写了一封信给英国的男神,请帮我改正一下语法错误!字数不够了,//表示换段,我还准备寄一个剪纸过去
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我写了一封信给英国的男神,请帮我改正一下语法错误!字数不够了,//表示换段,我还准备寄一个剪纸过去
Feb.13,2014
Dear .
Mr.*,words can’t describe.You really mean so much to me.When I feel down,I see your smiles,which make me feel like you understand me,and always do.I study English harder and harder,because this is my dream,and the dream is all about you.I wish one day I can go to UK to see you.There are about 8800 miles from China to UK,it’s a long way.But I believe that if I study hard,the dream will come true one day.
// I have seen lots of series of yours,and I like all the roles you play.You really did well in being human,Him & Her,Sherlock,The job lot,and so on.You are so cute that I can’t hold myself to love you.
There is a little gift in the envelope,I made it by myself.It called “Chinese Paper-cut” (it is a little ugly,but I did my best...).Could you please send me your autography and maybe a quote or anything on it?I would be very grateful,Thank you sooooo much!Love you 4ever!
Yours truly fan,*
Feb.13,2014
Dear .
Mr.*,words can’t describe.You really mean so much to me.When I feel down,I see your smiles,which make me feel like you understand me,and always do.I study English harder and harder,because this is my dream,and the dream is all about you.I wish one day I can go to UK to see you.There are about 8800 miles from China to UK,it’s a long way.But I believe that if I study hard,the dream will come true one day.
// I have seen lots of series of yours,and I like all the roles you play.You really did well in being human,Him & Her,Sherlock,The job lot,and so on.You are so cute that I can’t hold myself to love you.
There is a little gift in the envelope,I made it by myself.It called “Chinese Paper-cut” (it is a little ugly,but I did my best...).Could you please send me your autography and maybe a quote or anything on it?I would be very grateful,Thank you sooooo much!Love you 4ever!
Yours truly fan,*
（地址：从小到大）
（日期：日月年）
//Dear Mr.*
// It’s my pleasure to write this letter to you.This is the first letter in my life,so it needs a little courage of me.I am a huge fan of yours from China,and my name is *****.
Mr.*,words can’t describe my enthusiasm.You really do mean so much to me.When I dream ,I see your smile.I feel that you understand me,and always do.I study English harder and harder for you,because this is my dream,and the dream is all about you.I wish one day I can go to UK to see you.It's about 8800 miles from China to UK,which is a long way.But I believe that if I study hard,the dream will come true one day.
// I have seen lots of series of yours,and I like all the roles you play.You really did well in Being Human,Him & Her,Sherlock,The Job Lot,and so on.You are so cute that I can’t hold myself to love you.
There is a little gift in the envelope,I made it by myself.It called “Chinese Paper-cut” (It's not much,but I did my best.).Could you please send me your autography and maybe a quote or anything on it?I would be very grateful,Thank you sooooo much!Love you 4 ever!
我本人去过英国,觉得你已经写得蛮好了.给个分吧
（日期：日月年）
//Dear Mr.*
// It’s my pleasure to write this letter to you.This is the first letter in my life,so it needs a little courage of me.I am a huge fan of yours from China,and my name is *****.
Mr.*,words can’t describe my enthusiasm.You really do mean so much to me.When I dream ,I see your smile.I feel that you understand me,and always do.I study English harder and harder for you,because this is my dream,and the dream is all about you.I wish one day I can go to UK to see you.It's about 8800 miles from China to UK,which is a long way.But I believe that if I study hard,the dream will come true one day.
// I have seen lots of series of yours,and I like all the roles you play.You really did well in Being Human,Him & Her,Sherlock,The Job Lot,and so on.You are so cute that I can’t hold myself to love you.
There is a little gift in the envelope,I made it by myself.It called “Chinese Paper-cut” (It's not much,but I did my best.).Could you please send me your autography and maybe a quote or anything on it?I would be very grateful,Thank you sooooo much!Love you 4 ever!
我本人去过英国,觉得你已经写得蛮好了.给个分吧
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