神马作文网英语竞赛文章.求修改..
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英语竞赛文章.求修改..
这是在百度搜索到的文章.我今天去办公室排练时.老师说他怎么也读不通.是不是语法上有问题.修改.原文如下:Dreams I think you should have a dream yourself.If you don't have a dream,a wish,a plan,how can you now where do you want to go .Maybe some of your dreams are unrealistic and imposible ,but if you work hard ,your dream will come true one day.Dreams ,in one way,are not expensive .They cost any money .Even the poorest person can have all the dreams .But in another way they are expensive for you have to work to make them come true .We grow old by giving up our dreams.But you should have a dream deep in your heart.If you can dream ,you can do .If we stop dreaming ,we will close door to succees.I hope we will always be a dreamer ,a poet ,a seeker of rainbows after stroms.
这是在百度搜索到的文章.我今天去办公室排练时.老师说他怎么也读不通.是不是语法上有问题.修改.原文如下:Dreams I think you should have a dream yourself.If you don't have a dream,a wish,a plan,how can you now where do you want to go .Maybe some of your dreams are unrealistic and imposible ,but if you work hard ,your dream will come true one day.Dreams ,in one way,are not expensive .They cost any money .Even the poorest person can have all the dreams .But in another way they are expensive for you have to work to make them come true .We grow old by giving up our dreams.But you should have a dream deep in your heart.If you can dream ,you can do .If we stop dreaming ,we will close door to succees.I hope we will always be a dreamer ,a poet ,a seeker of rainbows after stroms.
Dreams I think you should have a dream to yourself.If you don't have a dream,a wish,a plan,how can you know where you want to go .Maybe some of your dreams are unrealistic and impossible ,but if you work hard ,your dream will come true one day. Dreams ,in one way,are not expensive .They do not cost money .Even the poorest person can have all the dreams .But in another way they are expensive that you have to work to realize . We grow older by giving up our dreams.But you should have a dream deep in your heart.If you can dream ,you can do it.If we stop dreaming ,we will close the door of success. I hope we were a dreamer ,a poet ,a seeker of rainbows after stroms in any time. 试着改的,这篇文章单词,词组和语法有很多错误,我尽力而为了,没有像改错那样一个句子只改一个地方,我想只要意思没变就好,期待高手指教!