神马作文网meg老师帮我看下这个开放作文
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老师您好 这周的作文又有点麻烦 一写开放作文我就头疼 觉得思维混乱 请老师帮我写一个 一会我试着写下谢谢 图片在附件 题目就说in your english class....让你describe 这个图，and explain how you understand it 貌似是个鸭子。。。
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As we can see from the picture, a mother duck stand next to her children, holding an umbrella ,in order to protect her baby from strong sunshine. However, she is under the sun.
The drawing indicates a phenomenon that mothers love their children so much that they（应用主格） cannot be independent in the future. Two small ducks in the picture received the love from their mother, however they have to live all depending(一句话不能出现两个谓语动词， 所以这里改为非谓语动词DEPENDING) on themselves （someday前不能加介词， 把 in去掉）someday before long.
In reality, we are the children like the small ducks, receiving the care from our parents, teachers and so on, therefore we rely on them when we meet any difficulties. However, once we rely on them too much, we also give up the chances to deal with problem by ourselves. There must be one day we live without our parents or teachers, so we are supposed to try to settle problems ourselves from now.
Only in this way will we live more comfortably(动词后用副词) in the future. (最后的倒装句式用的很好， 往往在作文的结尾处可以采纳倒装句起画龙点睛润色的作用)
整篇文章写得相当不错， 比老师写的也不差呀。老师在看着你的进步。希望你继续努力， 要有自信， 你已经是最棒的了。加油啊！下面提供有关溺爱孩子的内容， 可供参考。
Parents love their children by nature, where Chinese mothers and fathers are no exceptions. Chinese parents tend to dote（溺爱） on their children because each family is allowed to have only one kid due to birth control.（计划生育） They place too much hope on the treasured child that if he wants the star, they might even climb to pick it. For self-centered, the spoiled children depend on their parents for everything. As a result, once confronted （面对）with harsh（残酷的） reality, they are more likely to yield to hardships and difficulties in life.
最终答案：略
解题过程：
As we can see from the picture, a mother duck stand next to her children, holding an umbrella ,in order to protect her baby from strong sunshine. However, she is under the sun.
The drawing indicates a phenomenon that mothers love their children so much that they（应用主格） cannot be independent in the future. Two small ducks in the picture received the love from their mother, however they have to live all depending(一句话不能出现两个谓语动词， 所以这里改为非谓语动词DEPENDING) on themselves （someday前不能加介词， 把 in去掉）someday before long.
In reality, we are the children like the small ducks, receiving the care from our parents, teachers and so on, therefore we rely on them when we meet any difficulties. However, once we rely on them too much, we also give up the chances to deal with problem by ourselves. There must be one day we live without our parents or teachers, so we are supposed to try to settle problems ourselves from now.
Only in this way will we live more comfortably(动词后用副词) in the future. (最后的倒装句式用的很好， 往往在作文的结尾处可以采纳倒装句起画龙点睛润色的作用)
整篇文章写得相当不错， 比老师写的也不差呀。老师在看着你的进步。希望你继续努力， 要有自信， 你已经是最棒的了。加油啊！下面提供有关溺爱孩子的内容， 可供参考。
Parents love their children by nature, where Chinese mothers and fathers are no exceptions. Chinese parents tend to dote（溺爱） on their children because each family is allowed to have only one kid due to birth control.（计划生育） They place too much hope on the treasured child that if he wants the star, they might even climb to pick it. For self-centered, the spoiled children depend on their parents for everything. As a result, once confronted （面对）with harsh（残酷的） reality, they are more likely to yield to hardships and difficulties in life.
最终答案：略