神马作文网英语改错（下面一段话）
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英语改错（下面一段话）
well,generally I would like to search for informations or novels that i like from the Internet.
From my personal consideration,viewing books or novels on the Internet is not only convenient but saving as well.As you can see,usually a piece of novel can varies from 10 to 50 rmbs on the market.But to download the same piece of work from the Internet costs us merely some online cash,some even can be download foe free!Furthermore,if we need to view a book immediately,the Internet would definetly be the best choice.Who would bother to buy a piece of book from a long way to the bookstore while he can just view it at home from the Internet?
well,generally I would like to search for informations or novels that i like from the Internet.
From my personal consideration,viewing books or novels on the Internet is not only convenient but saving as well.As you can see,usually a piece of novel can varies from 10 to 50 rmbs on the market.But to download the same piece of work from the Internet costs us merely some online cash,some even can be download foe free!Furthermore,if we need to view a book immediately,the Internet would definetly be the best choice.Who would bother to buy a piece of book from a long way to the bookstore while he can just view it at home from the Internet?
1 From my personal consideration应改为In my opinion（在我看来……)
2 viewing books or novels 没有这种说法,把viewing改为reading
3 saving没有“省钱的”这个意思,savings表示存款,这里可以改为can save a lot of money
4 But to download 改为But downloading,用分词结构作主语表示一般情形
5 some even can be download foe free改为some can even be download for free
6 if we need to view a book 改错类似2
7 bother改为rather,would rather do宁愿做,所以后面的to 不要
8 from a long way to the bookstore 不通,可以改为from a distant bookstore
9 he can 中的 he改为one,保持前后的主语一致
10 view it at home 改法类似2,from the Internet最好是on the Internet,因为这里强调的是状态,而不是从那个地方得到的这个动作.
希望对你有帮助：）
2 viewing books or novels 没有这种说法,把viewing改为reading
3 saving没有“省钱的”这个意思,savings表示存款,这里可以改为can save a lot of money
4 But to download 改为But downloading,用分词结构作主语表示一般情形
5 some even can be download foe free改为some can even be download for free
6 if we need to view a book 改错类似2
7 bother改为rather,would rather do宁愿做,所以后面的to 不要
8 from a long way to the bookstore 不通,可以改为from a distant bookstore
9 he can 中的 he改为one,保持前后的主语一致
10 view it at home 改法类似2,from the Internet最好是on the Internet,因为这里强调的是状态,而不是从那个地方得到的这个动作.
希望对你有帮助：）
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