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对于这里的their到底用单数还是复数的代词格,在这里,一般情况下是用复数的,oneof...结构里,一般是以就近的那个名词作为先行词,故这里的who指的是ethnographers,自然的用的是th

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Idont'tknowwhysomanypeoplelikethemvery.首先don't写错了,very也不能放在句尾,应该去掉Ormaybeijustcan'tenjoytheirmusic..

1.Ithasbeenheldforfiveyears.start不能接时间段2,Andwealsotalkedaboutsomethingthatwewereinterestedin.----are

1.fewissues应该与issues类比,而不是一堆问题和一个问题类比,所以that变成those2.hadswum.这些不规则变化看起来很简单,可是做的时候很容易忽略.要小心.我记得OG里还有一

ThetasteofBeijingThetasteofBeijingissweet.Ice-sugargourd,Soybean-flourandCakeGlutinousriceball,allof

Therefor后面丢个E,Asanemperor,hehastodosomuchthings,buthealsohastimetorelax,hismotherwillnotaskhimtostud

1Youareinabadmood心情不好2Ifyoudo不是does3gotosleep3writediaryswa5thebestwaytorelaxyourself6whenyougoshopp

1itskind----仅有的一种,唯一的-------------2preoccupationwith----一门心思例句1Mr.Wang'shouseistheonlyoneofitskindin

1.(As)Weallknow2.Thereare1.3billion3.harding(hard)-workingpeople(去掉people）4.what'more(what's)5.China

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Thefirstone【改成thing】islisteningtotheteachercarefullyinclass.It'sthemostimportantthing.But【Idon'tthin

括号里的是修改后的词,有些是替换前面的一个词,有些是补充的Imetmywifetotallybyaccident,butIfellinlovewithheratthefirstsight.Itwasa

和他作为一个DJ一样作为一个娴熟的舞蹈者,他以前觉得他在全市夜店里很受欢迎注意时态表示动作发生在不同的时间点.found和were在主从句子中保持协调了,与asheis没关系.他现在的身份是adj,过

这个立意没有偏.这是一个角度.至少在45以上,具体多少要看你分析的是否到位了.如果分析的一般就在46左右,比较好的话就在48左右,出色的话有希望在52以上.

修改后：MyGreen…MyHealth…Agreelifestyleisgettingmoreandmorepopular.Myfamilyusuallysortgarbagesintokitche

MygoodfriendHello!MynameisNancy.Ihavesomanyfriends.ButIthinkMaryismybestfriend.Shealwaysplayswithme.

Ahandsomeman,whoiscalledJackiechan,wasbornon1954.4.7inH.K,whoisafamousactor.Hebegantotakepartinthemo

don't改为doesn't,something改为anything,having改为have,a改为an,effects改为effect这句话改一下：Hadquality-orientededuca